Six month script development service

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Professional script feedback on your screenplay

The beauty of development is having the time to really get into the weeds of storytelling. Crafting and redrafting the script when the possibilities are endless and you can write the story you’ve always wanted to tell.

During my six month script development service for emerging and established writers we will take a deep dive into your script across multiple drafts, honing in on story, structure, pace, dialogue, character development and tone. I will provide written notes with actionable suggestions that will help you develop the next draft of your script.

By the end, we will develop your script to a professional standard, with good conversation and industry insights along the way.

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What’s included?

  • An introductory video call (30 minutes) to discuss an action plan for either your feature screenplay (120 pages max) or a TV pilot (65 pages max).

  • Written feedback on 1 draft of your treatment (up to 5 pages) followed by 1 x 30 minute video call.

  • Written feedback on your first draft followed by 1 × 60 minute video call.

  • Written feedback on your second draft followed by 1 × 60 minute video call.

  • Written feedback on your third draft followed by 1 x 60 minute video call.

  • Written feedback on one draft of your series bible/pitch deck (up to 10 pages)

    Cost is £1,850

Numbers are limited so enquire now to secure your place.

Let’s work together

Book your free 15 minute introductory chat to discuss how we can collaborate together.

I look forward to hearing from you.